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Post  Tougane Masaru Wed Apr 13, 2016 3:22 pm

Tougane Masaru wrote:OOC Note

Since currently, there is no OOC thread for this SS, and the writer is losing patience and energy to deal with the possible and incoming problems about this thread through either chatbox or PM. This message is hoped to clarify on some issues.

This closed SS is being written to retcon and fix some inconsistencies regarding Tougane's character in Unendliche Jagd SS and his application, and most importantly, to pave way for the future of this character or give a closure to him. The story only revolves around the character 'Tougane Masaru' in obnoxious and pretentious fashion. This SS is expected to be found with inconsistencies in early chapters which will likely be addressed later on. The story sets in the universe of To Aru according to the RP of this forum but most of parts do not overlap this forum's timeline. Thus it does not feature or mention any canonical character or original characters. The expectation is to set on a different tone to any of the threads here and to anime-traditional fashion. It is not the intention at all to feature this as a long running fiction with the length of novella or light novel.

Initially, this SS is planed to be released at once with all chapters as most of the parts are written, but due to some errors and complications in timing schedules, this SS will be released episodically until the final chapter. However, it is not mandatory to go through every chapter as each only serves a justification in some action, both in-character and out-of-character.

Some content is likely to feature sexual-related content, drug and alcohol abuses.

At the current stage, this thread expects no participant.

Unendliche Jagd's plot: After the event in 23rd of July, an operative under a private military company - Tougane Masaru - abandons and attempts to forget the life of endless conflicts by moving on with his life. Married and relocated to Sapporo to start a new beginning, he encounters a hardship to settle in with a normal life and soon finds himself haunted relentlessly by the dark side of his past.

Monster ohne Namen's plot: Asada Shuji, a troubled orphan, deals with the loss of his parents and the seclusion from his childhood as he is seduced by violence to settle on a dangerous path ahead of him.

Der Mann, der aus der Kälte kam's plot: The most daredevil and relentless operative of the counter-intelligence agency under the Academy City - Tougane, whose loyalty and dedication devote to complete any objective given - is sent to chase after the missing biochemical weapon manufactured by the city and the people behind the act. As the existence of the weapon destabilizes the Academy City's national security and the internal politics inside his own agency, and the plot against the city itself unravels ...... A new threat emerges.









Unendliche Jagd:


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Unendliche Jagd (Conclusion):

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Monster ohne Namen:


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Monster Ohne Namen (Conclusion):


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Post  Tougane Masaru Wed Jun 01, 2016 6:54 pm

OOC Note


Since some contents do not seem to fit in the third chapter, so they are taken out and chopped apart, rearranged into a new chapter. The reason why this is not the third chapter is that it does not feature Tougane as the protagonist and this chapter only sets up for later chapters, more or less.

Color coding and additional themes may be added later on.





Prelude to "Der Mann, der aus der Kälte kam" Part 1:


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Prelude to "Der Mann, der aus der Kälte kam" Part 2:

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Prelude to "DER MANN, DER AUS DER KÄLTE KAM" Part 2 (Two-third):


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Prelude to Der Mann, der aus der Kälte kam Part 2 (Last part):

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Prelude to Der Mann, der aus der Kälte kam Final Part:

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Post  Tougane Masaru Wed Aug 03, 2016 3:47 pm

OOC Note wrote:With the trend of posting his own story rising out of nowhere, I feel strongly obligated to follow it.

P.S.The mess with naming and designating terms in used in the title will be handled soon.

2nd P.S. The first part of this 'chapter' will be released soon within a few days after a few or a lot of tweaking.

Der Mann, der aus der Kälte kam - Prologue:

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Post  Tougane Masaru Sun Aug 07, 2016 6:53 pm

OOC Note wrote:Since I have stalled the thread for some time, I feel the urgency to wrap it up before it causes a problem. One part per a day due to the limited capacity.

Chapter 1: The Concierge of Chaos:


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Chapter 2: The Blunt Instrument:

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Chapter 3: Close Shave:

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Chapter 4: Dame of Distress:




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Chapter 5: Internal Affairs:

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Chapter 6: Lea the Lure:


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Chapter 7: Deathly Disclosure:


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Chapter 8: Reservoir Revisited:

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OOC's note wrote:For how bad or worse it is, this is as much time as I had to write, check and fix. Furthermore would be stalling everything for too long. So I'm settling with this.

Soundtrack may be added soon, but since it is not the top priority, it will be proceeded after certain things.


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Chapter 9: Enter the underbelly :

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Chapter 10: Rose's thorns:

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Chapter 11: Tradecraft :

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Chapter 12: Bleeding Hearts:

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Chapter 13: Backstabbers:

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Chapter 14: Ground Zero:

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