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Post  Zuisho Ryuketsu on Sun Jun 01, 2014 10:58 am

Zuisho Ryuketsu

Immobile Cannon



"Fate has a weird way of bonding people...sometimes it only takes once, to know a person. Sometimes even lifetimes will pass, and you will learn nothing."



FULL NAME: Zuisho Ryuketsu
OTHER ALIAS:
CURRENT AGE: 16
GENDER: Male
OCCUPATION: Student
SCHOOL: A Certain Highschool
FACTION: N/A



APPEARANCE: Zuisho is rather well kept when it comes down to his appearance. He will make sure he wears clean clothing, dress in the school uniform and even take the time to make sure he has all his books. His silver eyes, and silver like hair seem to cause quite the fuss to many people, however he assures them it isn't anything bad. He has been thought to have been an albino at times, because of his complexion with his hair. When not in the school, he will often be seen in any sort of casual wear he feels he should wear. From Jeans to dress pants, it completely depends on the occasion. His hair, is rather distinct in a style, but he makes sure to keep it as so. He has kept himself to look at least presentable at all times. He wears boots, and is known to even wear gloves for no reason other then a fashion statement.

He is rather fit, feeling the need to keep himself as fit as he can so that he may be able to push his limits more.

HEIGHT: 5'7”, 170cm
WEIGHT: 137 lbs, 62.5 kg
DISTINGUISHING FEATURES: His silver hair, and his seemingly serious look that is on his face most of the time.


PERSONALITY: 
Level headed 
Zuisho is naturally a cool headed person. Often unshaken in most situations. This doesn't mean he can't be effected by a disturbing scene. Merely that he is able to cope with things, and not let it get to his head.
Courteous 
Zuisho is polite to anyone. Though it may not always be genuine, he was brought up to treat other people kindly first. This has lead him to be polite to almost anyone, so long as the situation calls for it.
Punctuality 
His dislike of being late has driven him to be on time to every occasion. If he isn't going to be on time, he feels there better be a really good reason, or he wont forgive himself.
Helpful 
Never having a problem with helping a friend, he has always been one to try to be the kinder of things. Feeling that he should pay attention to those who wish it, when he has most his things completed.
Determination 
He can become extremely determined in what he sets his mind to. Managing to push himself to dangerous extremes. If he has a goal, he'll see it threw, no matter the cost.
Hidden Hatred
"Unknowingly", he has gained a deep loathing to his family and the way they treated him. Usually shown by his seemingly intolerance of any reconciliation that they try to do for him. And always assuming there is some sort of motive behind everything they do.

LIKES: 
Cute things
Guitars
Singing
Comics
Learning
Keeping in Shape
Nature
DISLIKES: 
Ugly things
Lazy People
Color Yellow
Inconsiderate people
Slang
Fake

STRENGTHS: 
Improvement
Athletic

WEAKNESSES: 
Innocent


HISTORY: Zuisho was born into Academy City. One of many children, however he was born into a family that had already well established a business into the City. His Grand-Father was the CEO and head of the Ryuketsu Transportation LLC. With his father being a director in the line of the transportation corporation. His mother being a sort of secretary, and helping manage not just schedules but also any interaction with new people entering the corporation. Needless to say, the majority of his child-hood was left barren with the lack of his own connection to his parents.

Essentially this actually had almost no effect on Zuisho himself. He was put into day cares where he still managed to develop into quite and interesting character. Many of the caretakers would often state how helpful and polite he was as a child. This often drew the attention of the parents who had him, but they merely kept to themselves saying that the upbringing of their own child was done in the way they seemed to deem needing. Which they believed that for him to be even a child worth the corporate powers one day he needed to learn all the needed manners while keeping a face even when he was in great emotional pain. His progression carried on this way even in elementary, where he was often put into extracurricular activities. To keep him busy, though he himself for the most part actually chose these things. He had grown a sort of distaste even at such a young age to the fake smiles that he would often see before he went to bed, or before he would leave the complex to be taken to school. This gave him a sort of feed though, an endless desire to accomplish what he wanted to do for himself. Though his family would see him nothing more then a potential member of the company head, he still wished to push himself to other goals. If merely just to stay with his friends, or to at least get the self satisfaction of being able to do whatever he wished later on.

He started out slightly early when it came down to it. He asked his grandfather for permission to live by himself. Though he was rejected, he was however told he could live in the same building complex that his grand-father had normally resided in. Though for the most part he would be out on business trips dealing with the different companies for trade and other means. So the place would essentially be his own. His grand-mother usually accompanying him on the travels to enjoy the different areas they would travel to. He took the compromise, no more needing of the fake hellos and good byes. No more of the fake world he was stuck in with his parents, at least he knew that much was out of his way.

Since being in the house, he has been able to learn things at the pace he wanted, and not with the seemingly annoying watchful eyes of his family peering down his throat. He is able to hold things like group studies if need be, or interact with other people. His grand-parents are even seemingly more respectful of him so long as he doesn't disrespect them in turn. His parents will come over from time to time to discuss generally business things with the CEO, other then that they will give him a short smile and ask the normal lies.

RANK:
LEVEL: Level 3
Immobile Cannon (Particle Waveform High-Speed Cannon) : Much like Meltdowners ability. Zuisho has the ability to force electrons into a state of wave and particle form. Allowing him to fire off beams which can generally go threw anything because of their structure. However, unlike Meltdowner he needs to use a means to target targets. Using a laser pointer of sorts, like an iron sights on a gun, he is able to fire off at a target with a 4 second delay after targeting said target.  Zuisho is also restricted to staying stationary during which he wishes to fire. Causing him to seem more like a long range artillery type instead of being a more close combat fighter.

Again like Mugino, he cannot use the full power of the beams themselves, as doing so would lead to his death. The beams release a massive recoil based on the power released from them, causing damage to himself. However, the human body isn't willingly going to allow itself to die. As such he has no means to.

He can only fire 2 beams at the same time. But once fired he doesn't truly have control over them, as such he cannot use this for a defense, and must rely heavily on his own personal skills to deal with people who manage to come up to close range.

OTHER ABILITIES:
Academics 
Zuisho is quite the diligent person in most things, which are often reflected in his marks. His determination to succeed an push himself to be better is generally a reason for this.
Fair Cook 
Far from being the best cook, he has an intermediate understanding of how to cook. Enough that he wont kill himself cooking for himself.
Fit 
Being quite athletic, he is pretty fit. Able to do things most people can do and go further. Though there are limits to everything a person can do.
Musician
He is quite adept at playing guitar, and enjoys singing. Having practiced for sometime.


CHARACTER THEME:



PLAYER'S NAME: Zuisho Ryuketsu
RATING: R
FACE CLAIM: YAMATO HOTSUIN Devil Survivor 2: The Animation (if available)
OTHER CHARACTERS:
MISC. INFORMATION: Carries a few Laser pointer with him, with different ranges.


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Post  Zuisho Ryuketsu on Mon Jun 02, 2014 4:20 am

Test


It was a rather silent night. After he had finished his work in generally, ranging from his schools homework to just a basic work out he decided it would be best to take the time and walk around the apartment. Looking to the general layout he had got so use to. The apartment had the main entrance come into a sort of entry, which allowed guests to take off their clothing, and outdoor shoes. Of course this was generally a normal thing in almost every building. It then lead into the main room which was laid out more into a living room like style with a massive patio door that allowed you to go onto the balcony and look out to the city. The kitchen was then located in a more closed off section, though it was still connected by the door to the living room, which then lead to the bath room located near the entrance way. There was then the location of the different rooms. 1 which his grand parents used, located to the center of the entire area. His own which was located the furthest from the door. Allowing his window to have the same view the balcony would have, and then the general guest room, which was located closest to the bathroom. The master bedroom had it's own bathroom to go along with it, though that was more just out of convenience for them. He would for the most part do the cleaning, cooking and other chores to himself as he lived with well mostly himself with the amount of business trips his grand-father seemed to put himself out to. Though it wasn't like he had no funds, as the family made sure there was always funds, that and he was in a way paid based on his marks at times too. A sort of added incentive that he both enjoyed but had a dislike of.

He had tried to get a part time job before, but his family stated against it. Saying he should focus on his own means of friend building and making contacts for when he took the company. Yah, that was always it in the end. Their annoying obsession of what he needed to be. But without the cash they would give him he really didn't have any other means to get money. He would starve if he got a bad report even once. Not only that he wouldn't be able to forgive himself. He knew more then anything else to get out of their little clawed out life for him, that he needed to make himself the best. Better then they would have expected him to be, to push himself past them only to break the annoying chains they have on him...to never have to see their faces again. But for now, the convenience was there, plus with his grand-parents being more lenient on certain things it often allowed him to get the study groups, or keep up with his own music courses or even play in some jam sessions whenever his cousin would come over to play with him.

He fell onto the high quality couch as he had the tv turn on to some random anime channel and looked up to the ceiling, it's white boring texture showing the general feel of this place. Sure they had some antique pictures and such. But in all honesty they didn't spend enough time in the area to really say that they felt a need to decorate it. So it was a boring fake style..only until he recently moved in then...well to say the least it looks a little better. He then realized that some of the problems in the homework were quite brain wracking, it would probably lead to him having to help out his friends on some of their problems. Not too much effort though, it's not like they were idiots. 


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Post  Furuhashi Gou on Sat Jun 14, 2014 12:54 pm

Another tall person, huh? I’d really like to suggest people to look at the average Japanese heights at times~


Once I read the history I saw something really striking. So he moved to his grand parent’s place, which would mean that they are also living inside of Academy City. Now that may be troublesome. As far as I can tell, seeing retired people live in that city that is all about efficiency is something unusual, not to say unlikely. I doubt that there would be anyone just simply living there, without any reason, like work they have to do in the city.

Also the residential areas in Academc City mostly consist out of bigger buildings, only offering flats, I believe. I mean there is not really enough space to build nice houses in the city, as most of the city is taken by research facilities, schools and whatever else science needs. After all space no space is “wasted” in that city.

So I’d like you to change that.


Then again I really think that something is off about his life. For some reason I believe that Zuisho is actually someone who is highly likely to have already developed some kind of self-hate. After being confronted by an attitude like that from his parents he is developing in quite a similar direction. At least from my point of view that seems like something causing him to dislike himself.


His ability seems alright, so I’m just jumping down to the other abilities section. By looking at his likes I can tell that he has an affinity towards guitars and singing. Now I wonder if those are things he is actually good at, as being able to play a guitar or to sing quite well can also be considered as something to be put into the other abilities section.



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Post  Zuisho Ryuketsu on Sat Jun 14, 2014 9:11 pm

Furuhashi Gou wrote:Another tall person, huh? I’d really like to suggest people to look at the average Japanese heights at times~


Once I read the history I saw something really striking. So he moved to his grand parent’s place, which would mean that they are also living inside of Academy City. Now that may be troublesome. As far as I can tell, seeing retired people live in that city that is all about efficiency is something unusual, not to say unlikely. I doubt that there would be anyone just simply living there, without any reason, like work they have to do in the city.

Also the residential areas in Academc City mostly consist out of bigger buildings, only offering flats, I believe. I mean there is not really enough space to build nice houses in the city, as most of the city is taken by research facilities, schools and whatever else science needs. After all space no space is “wasted” in that city.

So I’d like you to change that.


Then again I really think that something is off about his life. For some reason I believe that Zuisho is actually someone who is highly likely to have already developed some kind of self-hate. After being confronted by an attitude like that from his parents he is developing in quite a similar direction. At least from my point of view that seems like something causing him to dislike himself.


His ability seems alright, so I’m just jumping down to the other abilities section. By looking at his likes I can tell that he has an affinity towards guitars and singing. Now I wonder if those are things he is actually good at, as being able to play a guitar or to sing quite well can also be considered as something to be put into the other abilities section.  



Thanks for taking the time to reply. Though pulling out all my hidden plots for him =( hahaha i was going to slowly rp out his sort of self hate to himself. Kinda like how people only discover certain things as life goes on. But i will gladly put that in. (A perfect example is how some peoples brains will block out certain things that occurred to continue moving on. Then if it's triggered it activates, and can change a person drastically.)

As for the height the only reason he's "tall" is because i was assuming that the average height in japan would have actually changed. Though then again i probably should look at the year the light novels take place in. As human height on average is supposedly going up last i looked. I believe the average Japanese man is 5'6" (meaning by this logic he would be shorter as a man is around 18-21...) but i will be sure to look it up. So i'll be changing that too then =)

I was wondering if i was allowed to put in that stuff in others. But now that you stated that i'll do so =) Again thanks for taking the time and checking out all the issues and such.

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Post  Furuhashi Gou on Sun Jun 15, 2014 10:55 am

I really hit a bad spot there, huh? But it’s good that you are going to put that in.


Well it’s most likely close to 1.70m for Index people. Looking at Touma as an example, who is only 1.68m tall.


But yeah, notify me when you did all those edits, at best in a short reply to this thread~

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Post  Zuisho Ryuketsu on Wed Jun 18, 2014 8:09 am

Furuhashi Gou wrote:I really hit a bad spot there, huh? But it’s good that you are going to put that in.


Well it’s most likely close to 1.70m for Index people. Looking at Touma as an example, who is only 1.68m tall.


But yeah, notify me when you did all those edits, at best in a short reply to this thread~

Revamped the history, added in some of the things you suggested, and edited the character test post haha XD Feel free to ask anything else about it.

Before it comes up (if it does for whatever reason) Him living alone isn't really that odd, more so in an apartment that is pretty well protected. And if i have to say it, there seems to be many living alone people in almost everything at young ages Razz. And you know academy city has good security.....yah....XD

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Post  Furuhashi Gou on Wed Jun 18, 2014 2:31 pm

Now then, after reading through your profile again and again, I couldn’t find anything else that is worth mentioning.

And as I lack flashy pictures or the authority to include them, a short and simple thing should be enough.

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Post  [Old] Index on Wed Jun 18, 2014 2:41 pm

Nicely done. I read through it and didn't find any inconsistency and he seems like a balanced Esper overall.



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