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[SNPC/Magician] Eden Prescott

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[SNPC/Magician] Eden Prescott

Post  Sir Alexander Beathen on Thu Feb 25, 2016 1:44 pm

EDIT: For whoever does Eval this can you also use the hide codes to address the secrets in this post.


"You claim to know the truth, but you only learned from what the victors have written themselves!"


FULL NAME: Eden Prescott (Preston)
AGE: 27
GENDER: Female
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: Elegant and beautiful she is 5'8 tall with long black hair and bewitching red eyes. She is normally found wearing a smart black suit with a skirt, and a necklace with a moonstone but when she is out on official duties with her lover she tends to wear a suit of armour as a sign of respect. The armour is a standard design fit for female knights with the symbol of the knight house it belongs. She is also seen wearing two gold rings, one with a black onyx stone and the other black tourmaline.

INFORMATION: Daughter from one of the members of Parliament in the current government, she comes from a long line of politicians who know about the truth of magic within the country. Unfazed by the true system that governs the country, she would soon meet the Head of Beathen Household on a political visit as a representative from the local MP of Cornwall. She was elegant and beautiful that is how Charles Beathen the current head had described her which became love at first sight.

Though while Martha Poppins was impressed by her Lord's ability to gain the affection of younger ladies she like many within the household has described Eden presence to have a negative impact. William Beathen the brother of Charles had found it a disgrace for the Head to engage with someone much younger. This had resulted in a fallout leading to Charles sending his brother away to Scotland for many months. Despite her relationship with the Head looking down upon by many others, Sarah the youngest child of Charles had gotten along very well with Eden showing her being good with children. Though Alexander seems too caught up in his own duties to pay much attention too Eden, the heir does worry that his father has changed a bit too much since they've gotten together. But never speaks up about it since his father seemed much happier with Eden around than before since the death of his mother.



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FACE CLAIM: Not a Character but was drawn by chaosringen.
http://chaosringen.deviantart.com/art/Armor-study-practice-429310009


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Re: [SNPC/Magician] Eden Prescott

Post  Sir Alexander Beathen on Thu Mar 10, 2016 9:03 am

I was thinking about the possible sticking point in this SNPC and I figured it was that in the hidden abilities section. So I thought to myself it's best to explain my intentions and my idea behind it hoping it would meet your guys approval.

Hey more information shouldn't hurt right?

The following will be placed in hide tags, so apologise for those who cant read it.


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Re: [SNPC/Magician] Eden Prescott

Post  Edana Callan on Mon Mar 28, 2016 10:26 am

Seems like I’m the new someone.

As requested I will keep this evaluation hidden from the public eye, agreeing with the importance of spoiler avoiding.


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Re: [SNPC/Magician] Eden Prescott

Post  Sir Alexander Beathen on Wed Apr 13, 2016 11:33 am

Hey just posting to note I've made the required changes to the first post. Of course again all of it is in the hide tags.

Sorry for the delay of my part also.


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Post  Edana Callan on Thu May 12, 2016 4:58 pm

And a delay to follow up a delay, how very lovely.


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Re: [SNPC/Magician] Eden Prescott

Post  Sir Alexander Beathen on Mon May 16, 2016 12:11 am

I'm very sure I done all the edits required. Though if the issue of symbolism is not solve with the current update, that I may need a few suggestions.

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Re: [SNPC/Magician] Eden Prescott

Post  Leivinia Birdway on Wed Jun 01, 2016 4:58 pm

Is it just me or does this account fit Magic Side modding much better?


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Re: [SNPC/Magician] Eden Prescott

Post  Sir Alexander Beathen on Thu Jun 02, 2016 11:37 am

Edits made and response below to your questions.


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Re: [SNPC/Magician] Eden Prescott

Post  Leivinia Birdway on Tue Jun 07, 2016 11:04 pm


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Re: [SNPC/Magician] Eden Prescott

Post  Sir Alexander Beathen on Wed Jun 08, 2016 3:59 pm

Done

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Re: [SNPC/Magician] Eden Prescott

Post  Leivinia Birdway on Sat Jun 11, 2016 8:54 am

Now that technology has finally blessed you with the right to get a thorough read from myself, I can ultimately do this:


Also, that final edit is actually quite nice. Good symbolism, very good symbolism. I can feel you’ve gotten slightly better at it~


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